Week 6

Week 6

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Throughout the evolution, some physiological changes, such as genetic or physical variation, have occurred to human. For instance, human evolves from ape to Cro-Magnon. The changes are quite remarkable as a really long period elapsed, which started from our ancestors.  However, as contrast with physiological human evolution, I think evolution of social skills appears to individual and can occur in short time. For instance, it is my case ; My handwriting was too terrible to communicate with other by letter. Therefore, in community, such as my school, teachers mind checking my working done by handwriting. And then, I decided to alter my illegible handwriting into great one. I really tried to achieve improvement of my handwriting. And, not many days after, I could receive favorable evaluation of my handwriting from SAM teacher : "Wow, it's Evolution!" This instance shows that people can achieve evolution of social skill (handwriting - the means of communicating with others) in just short time. However, there is an wondering point : Is it possible to achieve social evolution, even if society doesn't allow people to do so? I believe that people can achieve social evolution perfectly, despite social limitations.

1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by the physiological human evolution. Then I pointed out another meaning of evolution, which relates to improvement of social skills, through the incidents of my handwriting.

2. Explains the topic -
In the attention grabber I introduce social evolution. However, a question occurs ; Is it always possible to achieve social evolution, in spite of some social limitations?

3. My thesis -
I believe that people can achieve social evolution perfectly, even if society doesn't allow them to do so.