Week 8

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1. What is my thesis?

Despite some social limitations, people achieve social evolution perfectly.

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?
I am using three incidents of famous persons.

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?

My arguments are based on evidence ; Three incidents of famous persons. - Gandhi, Nelson Mandela, and Jeong Ji Hoon.

My Confirmation

Many people believe that people cannot achieve social evolution perfectly due to their social limitations. However, there are three incidents disproving that. First one is , as mentioned before, of Gandhi's, his social limitation is the level of caste, Varshyia. Second one is of Nelson Mandlea's. Nelson Mandela is a South African. His social limitation was racial discrimination. He had often been discriminated by White - South African and the other white persons. However, in spite of racial disrimination, he tried to resolve the problem caused by racial discrimination. As a result, he won a Nobel prize for peace. In addition, he finally became the president of South Africa at 1994. The third incident is of Jeong Ji Hoon's. He is a Korean singer. His alis is 'RAIN'. When he was young, he had suffered from really severe poor. Once, in night, he wanted to drink water, but the light was gone out. He rummaged the table, and found the kettle. He drank water and felt the water was so cool. But, he also chewed something in the water. Surprisingly, something he chewed was the eggs of spiders! This story shows how he was poor. However, he didn't give up his dream, dancer, despite of his social limitaion, poverty. As a result, he became the most famous K-pop star. His teacher Park Jin Yeong (JYP) said that 'Ji Hoon (RAIN) really tried hard to become the dancer. He always practiced the dancing even during the break time.' It indicates that the key to achieve social evolution depends on the strong willingness.